By
Maister Colyne Stewart, March AS 52 (2018)
The
hammer rings on anvil’s head,
The
steel wed in Credne’s clamor,
Smith,
Gannicus, gives of his art,
Generous
heart, the Crown thinks thus:
To
Goibniu’s son, give gift,
Herald,
swift, Lén’s star pearls strew,
Glad
Orion’s belt gird him,
Strong
of limb, honour well won.
Rylan,
Edward, rich royals,
Loyal,
of Mac Cuill sure scions,
In
Ben Dunfirth done on feast
Of
priest McCartan, bless’d birth
In
year two and fifty thus,
For
Gannicus, lords of tree,
Make
note his deeds and sing sure,
Endure
his name, give true troat.
Written
as a casbairdne, an early Irish poetic form. Casbairdne were quatrains with
seven syllable lines. Lines two and four rhymed, while one and three should
have consonance with them (I did not adhere strongly to the consonance in this
poem). Each couplet (set of two lines) had to employ cross-rhyme (where a word
in the first half of the line rhymed with the last word in the other line in
the couplet). Two words per line had to alliterate; in the final line of the
quatrain the alliteration had to be between the last syllable and the previous
stressed syllable. The poem ended with dunadh, which usually meant the last
word of the poem had to be the same as the first, or it had to alliterate or
rhyme with the first. (Sometimes dunadh also referred to chain rhyme).
Below
is a copy of the poem with footnotes. Alliterated words have the first letter
shown in bold, while rhymed syllables are shown in italics.
The
hammer rings on anvil’s head,
The
steel wed in Credne’s
clamor,
Smith,
Gannicus, gives of his art,
Generous
heart, the Crown thinks thus:
To
Goibniu’s
son, give gift,
Herald,
swift, Lén’s star pearls strew,
Glad Orion’s belt gird him,
Strong
of limb, honour well won.
Rylan,
Edward, rich royals,
Loyal,
of Mac Cuill
sure scions,
In
Ben Dunfirth done on feast
Of
priest McCartan, bless’d birth
In
year two and fifty thus,
For
Gannicus, lords of tree,
Make
note his deeds and sing sure,
Endure his name, give true troat.
